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Frankenstein: Letters I-IV

11/25/2025

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Mary Shelley opens Frankenstein with four epistolary letters from Robert Walton to his sister, Margaret Saville. Through these letters, Walton reveals his ambitions, fears, values, and vulnerabilities even before Victor Frankenstein enters the story.

In a well-developed response, analyze how Mary Shelley uses the first four letters to construct the character of Robert Walton.
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Your analysis should:
  • Examine Walton’s voice, tone, and narrative perspective,
  • Explore his aspirations, insecurities, and emotional state,
  • Discuss how Shelley uses language, imagery, and Romantic/Enlightenment ideas to shape the reader’s perception of him,
  • Consider how the MIT Press footnotes deepen your understanding of Walton’s goals, influences, and worldview,
  • And evaluate how Walton serves as a frame narrator whose character both parallels and foreshadows Victor Frankenstein.
Support your interpretation with specific textual evidence from the letters and relevant footnotes.
Primary Blog Expectations (respond to the prompt above): 150-200 words, minimal errors in grammar and usage, thoughtful and thorough writing. Please use the name you were assigned in class as your nom de plume and be sure to add word count. Due by 11:59 p.m. Sunday, November 30, 2025.

Secondary Blog Response Expectations (read everyone's primary responses, select two that interest you, and respond to their ideas): 100-150 words EACH, minimal errors in grammar and usage, thoughtful and thorough writing. Please use the name you were assigned in class as your nom de plume and be sure to add word count. Due by 11:59 p.m. on Monday, December 1, 2025.
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Elisabeth Wollman
11/30/2025 10:41:31 am

Mary Shelley’s Frankenstein follows Victor Frankenstein, an ambitious scientist who once sought to create life but comes to regret his decision when horrific consequences arise. The novel opens with four letters from Robert Walton, a sea captain seeking scientific discovery and glory, to his sister Margaret Seville. Through Shelley’s deliberate use of language and point of view, she introduces Walton as ambitious and confident, yet lonely and biased in his perception of others.

From the novel’s start, Walton presents himself as immensely driven and certain of his success. He writes how his life “might have been passed in ease and luxury,” but he prefers “glory to every enticement” that wealth presents, a contrast that highlights his willingness to pursue his ambitions over the comfort that his high social status promises. Walton’s later claim that “success shall crown” his endeavors, followed by the question “wherefore not?”, further emphasizes his confidence in his abilities. Shelley’s use of “shall” in the captain’s declaration and the phrasing of his question establishes Walton’s assertive, self-assured tone, while the utilization of first-person perspective raises doubts about the reliability of his self-estimations, hinting that his confidence may border on arrogance.

As the letters progress, Shelley reveals Walton’s loneliness and bias that underlie his confident exterior. Despite being surrounded by a crew of men, he admits to his sister he has “no friend” and longs for a companion “whose eyes would reply” to his, suggesting not only his emotional and intellectual isolation but also elitism. Walton’s particularly selective desire for a friend, one who matches his intellect and passion, implies a sense of superiority over his apparently uneducated and unsophisticated crew, for how can one not find a single friend amongst a crew of what must be at least thirty men? Through first-person narration, Shelley not only develops Walton’s longing and melancholic tone but also indicates that his perspective is subjective, biased, and potentially unreliable.

By developing Walton’s tone and perspective through her precise diction in the novel’s first four letters, Shelley portrays the captain as a man of great ambition and confidence, who, despite these attributes, is deeply flawed, driven by his biased view of intellectual companionship and glory.

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Huang Lu
11/30/2025 11:32:43 pm

I agree! Though Walton’s expressed loneliness can make readers sympathize, it’s evident that it’s a consequence of his biased friends. When reading letter two, I felt as if I should “feel bad” for him, but really, out of thirty men, he couldn’t find a single friend? Along with having to reach his spiritual level of education and emotional intensity, it’s an expedition, not a fond brotherhood. Walton’s longing for triumph also calls into question my reliability in his character. Prioritizing his own hierarchy and fame, showing no recognition of others' part success, truly reveals his elitism and superiority amongst his crew. I find his character to be unreliable.

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RUPA BAI FURDOONJI
12/1/2025 09:03:24 pm


I agree with this idea because the paragraph highlights how Robert Walton's initial letters are not just about ambition, but also about his deep loneliness. He writes to his sister about wanting a true friend who understands him, showing he feels isolated even with his crew around. This feeling of loneliness, combined with his drive for glory, makes him a relatable character and a good parallel to Victor Frankenstein, who also experiences profound isolation. By starting with Walton's ambition and his yearning for connection, Shelley effectively sets the stage for the novel's themes of ambition, discovery, and the human need for companionship, while also hinting at the potential pitfalls of both.

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Emily Warren Roebling
12/15/2025 08:50:13 am

After reading some other responses this definitely was the one that made me realize that Mary Shelley's diction is very important in this book. She chose very specific words for each of the characters she made. I would also agree with another responsee that Robert Walton is not a very reliable narrator for the letters. He seems to push his own point of view and I'm not sure we can trust him on the kind of person he is. This also makes me further question Frankenstein. Maybe he will also be just as unreliable and untrustworthy; pushing his honor and glory to make himself seem different than he actually is.

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Matilde Montoya
11/30/2025 06:41:45 pm

In “Frankenstein” from Letters I–IV, Mary Shelley, the original author of this book, constructs Robert Walton as an ambitious and confident captain, yet also a lonely and impulsive one willing to risk anything for the sake of glory and power. The explorer whose tone shows both Romantic idealism and Enlightenment confidence. Walton, who is also the narrator, writes with passionate intensity, describing his journey as a quest for "measureless benefit”( Shelley) to humankind, reflecting Enlightenment faith in knowledge and progress. Yet his diction also exposes insecurity. This is because the captain repeatedly says in his letters that he has no friends, suggesting emotional loneliness and yearning beneath his heroic dreams. The author's choice of imagery shows vast landscapes—“a country of eternal light”— proves Walton’s Romantic connection to the unknown while foreshadowing the danger of unchecked ambition.

The MIT Press footnotes further clarify Walton’s intellectual influences, more importantly, his admiration for explorers like Captain Cook, whose fame also shapes his desire for glory. These footnotes emphasise how Captain Walton’s worldview is shaped by many readings, ambition, and a motivation for greatness rather than real experience. As the narrator, Walton compares both Victor Frankenstein and himself to both seek discovery at any cost, both feel lonely, and are driven by dreams of achieving “glory”, whether it be knowledge or discovery. Walton’s earliest letters, which I think are starting to foreshadow Victor’s tragic arc and prepare us, the reader, for the anger and sadness.

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Matilde Montana (Fixed)
12/1/2025 08:00:11 pm

The MIT Press footnotes further clarify Walton’s intellectual influences, more importantly, his admiration for explorers. An example from me is the famous explorers such as Captain Hook or even Cook, whose fame also shapes his desire for glory. These footnotes emphasise how Captain Walton’s worldview is shaped by many readings, ambition, and a motivation for greatness rather than real experience. As the narrator, Walton compares both Victor Frankenstein and himself to both seek discovery at any cost, both feel lonely, and are driven by dreams of achieving “glory”, whether it be knowledge or discovery. Walton’s earliest letters, which I think are starting to foreshadow Victor’s tragic arc and prepare us, the reader, for the anger and sadness.

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Marie Durocher
12/1/2025 08:08:48 pm

I enjoyed how you mentioned Walton's feelings of loneliness and yearning that lie below his want for glory. I feel like him saying he has "no friend" who really understands him could show that his desire for glory isn't just about recognition or discovery, but perhaps maybe a way to fill the void of loneliness he feels and find validation? I think he might pour so much emotion and time into his ambitions as a way to maybe feel a connection to something, anything, in place of human connection.

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Marie Durocher
12/1/2025 08:20:03 pm

Cont.

In addition, I just think it's very interesting how he expresses how lonely he feels despite the fact he is surrounded by multiple men on the same ship as him. This could show his selective nature, him wanting someone who embodies the same qualities as him, matching his intellect and passion. I think this could also perhaps show Walton as a bit "picky" or "arrogant". Like "oh, no one is on my level," which is very intriguing!

Elisabeth Wollman
12/2/2025 03:53:54 pm

I found it very interesting how you read Walton’s desire for a companion as insecurity! I’m curious about what you think he is insecure about. Despite his deep longing for a friend, is there a deeper reason he can’t find adequate company? Is he insecure about social interaction, fitting in, or something more? I think this is a unique take on Walton's narration, and I’d love to hear more about what you think. Personally, as I went through his letters, I read Walton’s vulnerability and loneliness as insecurity, yes, but primarily as the privilege indicative of his high social status. It felt to me that Walton’s selectivity in whom he keeps as company hinges on his biased notions of what “adequate company” is, which, to him, means educated, respectable, and wealthy people. I think this view is especially evident in the difference between Walton’s generous view of the lieutenant, who is unemployed but of a noble status, and his demeaning view of the shipsmaster, who is kind and loving but lacks wealth. Something I also found interesting in my reading of Walton’s letters was the MIT footnotes on page eight that explore the differences between the two types of nobility, one that describes wealth and the other of character, and the connection of this concept to Mary Shelley’s own experiences. Upon reading more about people's perceptions of his character, I now think Walton's character may more deeply reflect the complexities and contradictions of the elite, noble class that Shelley witnessed in her lifetime.

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Mélanie Hahneman
12/7/2025 08:58:45 pm

I liked your analysis of Walton's ambition and also his loneliness. I think that part was very strong, in addition to your bring up in the MIT Press footnotes to deepen your analysis. You make a very compelling point about Walton's admiration for figures like Cook shapes the worldview more than reality actually does. I also admired and agreed with your claim that Shelley uses imagery like "country of eternal light" to blend romance with subtle warnings about unguided ambition. The comparison you created between Walton and Victor shows how Shelley builds a hidden parallel about their shared obsession with glory, foreshadows not only danger but also a form of isolation.

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Huang Lu
11/30/2025 07:05:29 pm

Mary Shelley’s novel Frankenstein opens with four letters narrated by Robert Walton, a desperate sea captain on a northern expedition to make scientific discoveries. In these letters, Walton writes to his sister, Margaret Seville, and details his ambitious plan, emotional states, and findings throughout his expedition. Analyzing Shelley’s use of romantic language and an open narrative of Walton’s thoughts, Shelley reveals Walton’s character as emotionally deep and idealistic, yet slightly arrogant and egotistical.
At the start of the letters, Walton openly expresses his sensitivity and loneliness, longing for someone who understands his “noble spirit” and “sympathizes” with him. The yearning for an exceptional friend directly reveals Walton’s passionate, introspective nature and desire for friendships on a spiritual level. Though this reveals a vulnerable side of Walton, it also hints at signs of arrogance and elitism. Walton indirectly implies that only one person can satisfy him, Victor Frankenstein; no one else is worthy of connection, nor can they meet his level of nobility. Shelley reveals Walton’s emotional depth and high self-regard through Walton’s open self-expression, believing that true friendship is only possible with exceptional people.
Shelley reinforces the idea of arrogance through Walton’s purpose and description of the Arctic expedition. Shelley conveys romantic language of nature, stating that the voyage is a promise to him of something that will bring him “honor and glory,” allowing him to achieve something “inestimable for humankind.” This reveals Walton’s idealism, that the exploration is just a heroic, worthy of fame, and curious fulfillment. However, the described purpose of the voyage reveals his self-importance and egotism. Walton states that he will accomplish something no one is capable of, treating the serious expedition as the center of triumph, placing himself above others, and overestimating his ability to succeed. Shelley reveals Walton’s idealistic perspective and egotism through her romantic language on the expedition.
Throughout the four letters, Shelley shapes Walton’s emotional depth and subtle arrogance as a parallel to Victor Frankenstein. Walton’s longing for a friend reveals his sensitivity, but setting Victor as his only “worthy” friend shows his elitism. Along with his romantic descriptions of the expedition, revealing his idealism and confidence in achievement, he also exposes his egotism. These traits can parallel Victor, as Victor chases success and emotional intensity as well.

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Jiang Hui
12/1/2025 06:34:31 pm

I find your elaborations on the depth of Robert Walton's character especially interesting. Specifically, on the written implications that Walton longs for a companion like Victor Frankenstein. It is definitely important to acknowledge the role of Walton's desire for friendship as it helps shape his character within the letters beginning Shelley's novel. Walton comes off vulnerable, as you mentioned, in his letters to his older sister. This side of Walton directly contrasts the man we see fantasizing about journeying to the North Pole. His longing for a friend creates emotional depth. We learn that even a man who is chasing glory such as himself still wants something as “simple” as a friend who relates to himself.

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Mélanie Hahneman
12/7/2025 09:13:44 pm

I like how your response emphasizes Walton's emotional depth and the puzzles within his character. Your point that Walton's longing for someone who matches his "noble spirit" reveals both his vulnerability and arrogance as a person. It shows how Shelly shows a man who craves connections/attention while also thinking that only "extraordinary" people are worthy of him. Your analysis of the Arctic expedition is quite interesting, I loved when you talked about the use of language like "Honor and glory" reveals a lot more about Walton's ego than idealism. Highlighting Walton's self importance shows the comparison to Victor in a clear path: as they both romanticize their ambitions and have no limits.

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RUPA BAI FURDOONJI
11/30/2025 07:24:04 pm


In Frankenstein, Mary Shelley uses the four letters to introduce a curious sailor whose ambition is to uncover the mysteries of nature. This character, Robert Walton, writes to his sister Margaret to stay connected with his family and share the challenges and dangers he faces on his Arctic voyage. Through these letters, Shelley creates a frame narrative that establishes Walton as the initial narrator and provides context for the rest of the story.

In the first letter, Walton writes about his preparations to set sail and explains his decision to his sister. His goal is to accomplish something that has never been done before, similar to Victor’s own ambitious pursuits. He is so blinded by his desires that he doesn’t consider the consequences, which he later regrets. He reveals that he is about to embark on a dangerous journey to the North Pole, which he describes as a place of “eternal light.” In St. Petersburg, he hopes to make scientific discoveries and explore land that no one has ever set foot on. Shelley’s use of imagery and metaphor of the North Pole being a ‘’land of eternal light’’ illustrates his eagerness for discovery and his excitement for the unknown.

In the other letters, Shelley develops Walton’s loneliness and emotional vulnerability. In Letter II, he expresses how isolated he feels and how no one on the ship understands or shares his dreams. Letter III highlights his determination and willingness to take risks, even when faced with danger, showing that ambition can sometimes blind him to consequences. By Letter IV, Walton finally meets Victor Frankenstein, someone who listens and shares his curiosity, which begins to ease his isolation. Through these letters, Shelley not only deepens Walton’s character but also emphasizes the themes curiosity, companionship, and the pursuit of personal goals, while setting up the frame narrative that guides the reader through Victor's story.

The MIT Press footnotes helped me understand how Walton’s story connects to the other characters. The creature’s sense of isolation and desire to belong mirrors Walton’s wish for someone to share his experiences with and to feel part of society. Similarly, Victor’s curiosity about nature and hope for discovery relate to Walton’s adventurous spirit and his drive to achieve his goals.

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Marie Curie
12/3/2025 08:50:40 am

I agree, Walton does have so much confidence in the voyage that he dismisses the dangers that could come with it. He hopes to explore a land that no one else has. In the first letter although he mentions the risks that come with it, he quickly brushes over the fact that he may not see his sister again. Yes, I also agree about the MIT footnotes. They helped me understand how Walton connects with other characters and how foreshadow is used with the other characters, especially with Walton and VIctor. Their differences and also how they are similar in some ways.

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Mary Chilton noyes
11/30/2025 07:47:28 pm

In the first four letters of Frankenstein, Mary Shelley uses Robert Walton's voice and narrative style to make him feel both ambitious and a little insecure. His tone mixes excitement about discovery with moments of loneliness, especially when he admits he has "no friend" who understands him, which immediately makes him seem vulnerable. Shelley's Romantic language, like his descriptions of the "eternal light" of the North and his longing to accomplish something great, shows how driven he is, but it also reveals how unrealistic and emotional he can be. The Enlightenment-style references in the footnotes about scientific exploration and polar geography help explain why Walton is so obsessed with knowledge and glory, almost like he thinks he can improve humanity by risking everything. Those details shape our perception of Walton as someone who truly believes he's destined for greatness, but also who desperately wants validation. Because he writes with such honesty, he becomes a strong frame narrator whose dreams and flaws foreshadow Victor Frankenstein's even more extreme ambition. Before Victor even enters the story, we already see how dangerous uncheck curiosity can be through Walton's letters.

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Huang Lu
12/1/2025 01:56:39 pm

I agree! Shelley’s choice of first-person perspective gives readers insight into Walton's open self-expression, revealing his characteristic flaws of narcissism or insecurity. His obsession with glory and fame reveals how needy he is for validation, which makes me curious about his upbringing and childhood. He is honest but unaware of his elitism, which shows that his character has holes. However, Walton underlies his overconfidence with risk-taking and ambition, portraying him as a trustworthy character. I also like the way you parallel Victor Frankenstein, showing Walton’s fast, extreme interest in him as dangerous.

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Mayumi Kimura
12/1/2025 07:49:39 pm

I agree with your points about Walton’s ambition and insecurity. I also saw how lonely he is, especially when he admits he has “no friend,” which shows his emotional vulnerability. Like you said, he is daring, and I agree that his choices are risky. Even though he tells his sister he will not “rashly encounter danger,” he still goes forward with the voyage, which shows how strongly his ambition pushes him.

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Marie Durocher
12/1/2025 07:56:03 pm

I completely agree with your points about Walton! I think his letters very clearly show his feelings of loneliness and vulnerability, which I think makes him a very relatable character, as those are emotions we all commonly face. I think it's also very interesting how Shelley uses romantic imagery, like the "eternal light" you mentioned to show how he admires nature and how we see the intensity of his emotions. I also really liked how you mentioned that through Walton's letters, we see how ambition can be dangerous in a way, as he is willing to risk his life for glory. And at that point, you must question, what price is worth paying for greatness?

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Mayumi Kimura
11/30/2025 09:50:18 pm

In the novel Frankenstein, Mary Shelley presents Robert Walton as a character defined by both ambition and vulnerability. She does this through the first four letters, writing to his sister he reveals the emotional aspect behind his voyage, offering the readers direct insight into his state of mind. These letters show how deeply isolated Walton felt " I have no friend...I desire the company of a man who could sympathize with me", he confides in his sister exposing his loneliness and longing for emotional connection. However, despite his feelings of loneliness, he assured his sister, "I will not rashly encounter danger," suggesting that he sees the risks of the voyage but he continues to believe in its success. Mary Shelley carefully crafts these letters to establish Walton as a complex character through direct insight into his thoughts.

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Jiang Hui
12/1/2025 07:07:34 pm

These letters ARE carefully crafted to establish Walton as a complex character. The epistolary writing style definitely helps emphasize the depth of Robert Walton. We as the readers gain a more intimate understanding of the emotional depth of Captain Robert Walton as he communicates with his older sister, Margaret Walton. Even though he is on a ship surrounded by a crew of which we constructed, he still exhibits, as you mentioned, traits of isolation and loneliness as a result of his desire for friendship. These characteristics are important in shaping Walton’s complexity. He is both hopeful in regards to his expedition and alone due to his lack of companionship.

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Rina Monti
12/15/2025 09:30:11 am

I agree with this as Robert Walton is a very lonely character so he is expressed as vulnerable. Usually when you are lonely, you feel vulnerable to certain things and exposed to, so Mary Shelley did a great job with expressing his vulnerability. I also liked how you used quotes to back up your support and evidence about Mary Shelly and how she described this characters and describing how lonely he is with having no friends etc.

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Jiang Hui
11/30/2025 10:17:59 pm

Mary Shelley’s Frankenstein begins in an epistolary style. The reader follows Captain Robert Walton on his journey to the North Pole through the letters he writes to his sister, Margaret Walton. It is through these letters Shelley reveals Walton’s passion for exploration and his drive to accomplish his journey. We also learn of his feelings of isolation, and how he wishes for one thing, a friend.

Shelley writes Walton through the lens of a romantic. As he describes his “favorite dream” of exploring to the North Pole, he does so in a way that clearly portrays his strong desire to succeed. He speaks of his journey’s beauty to his sisters and its importance is revealed to the reader. The way in which Walton describes the North Pole not only shed light on his ties to being a romantic, but Shelley’s romantic writing style. We learn that Robert Walton is a man who has walked many paths in deciding what he wishes to do. He is a failed poet and self-taught with the help of his uncle’s vast library. In the letters, he discusses his desire to complete this expedition with a clarity that lets the reader assume he has things “all figured out,” however the cold mood evoked by Walton’s location and his writing leaves another hole in his character. Walton lacks a friend.

Walton describes his lack of companionship with a sense of both longing and passion, brought on by his romantic writing style. His perspective through these letters is almost a reflection of Shelley and her portrayal of her characters. Walton’s desire for a friend is eventually amended as he meets who the reader assumes to know as Victor Frankenstein. He describes Victor with the same sense of passion to which he described his “favorite dream,” revealing the importance of having someone to Walton. Victor and Walton’s similarities strengthen their relationship and help shape their individual characters before the novel has truly begun.

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Mayumi Kimura
12/1/2025 07:55:17 pm

I agree that Walton’s letters to his sister clearly show his loneliness and his longing for a true friend. In my blog, I focused on how Shelley uses this format to give us direct insight into his vulnerability, especially when he admits that he has no friend and wants someone who can sympathize with him. I also pointed out how he tries to reassure his sister that he will not rush into danger, which shows his mix of ambition and self-awareness.

I did not notice the Romantic lens until you mentioned it. Now I can see how his passionate descriptions of the North Pole and his idealistic mindset reflect Romantic qualities that deepen our understanding of his character.

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Matilda Montana
12/1/2025 08:19:28 pm

Do you believe that once Captain Walton hears the creature's side of being treated and less than a human by Victor Frankenstein , will he then change his perspective of not only his best friend, and is the glory truly worth it? Is the cost of glory truly so wonderful to hurt people so pure and terrible, and to understand that wisdom wouldn't it take away from his humanity? Degrading something you created to prove a point just to toss it away like trash. I believe as explorers and scientist trying to discover the truth, that Captain Walton is a very good friend and listener to Victor Frankenstein but he never got to hear the other side of the creature, but I think once he hears that point of view I truly believe that that will change his opinion of his very good friend because anyone who's willing to do that to someone or a creation that they did, and treat it so poorly is not worthy of glory to the secrets of wisdom.

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Marie Curie
12/2/2025 02:05:04 pm

Yes, Walton longs for a companion who would support him on his voyage. He is lonely and there is foreshadowing of what will become of him through Frankenstein. I also explained this in my footnote. Although the contrast between Victor and Walton such as Walton keeps a relationship strong with his sister by writing these letters to her, Victor, on the other hand, is lonely and frustrated. Thus, lashing out in anger at the people on the ship. Though the contrast is clear, there is foreshadowing of what will happen to Walton if he has no one as his companion.

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Agnes Pockels link
12/4/2025 10:24:27 pm

I agree with your interpretation of Walton‘s character, especially how Shelley uses an epistolary style to show his romantic ideas and deep loneliness. Through his letters, Walton‘s passion for exploration seems almost like a dream when he writes about the North Pole with wonder and ambition, thinking that the goal will give him a purpose in life. At the same time, he tries to hide his emotional emptiness. Walton expresses how much he wants a friend. This shows that underneath all his confidence he is vulnerable. I like how you highlighted that because it shows when Victor enters the story he seems to be satisfied.

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Marie Durocher
12/1/2025 07:21:56 pm

In her novel Frankenstein, Mary Shelley begins with a series of four letters written by explorer Robert Walton to his older sister Margaret Saville as he is out on the sea. In these letters, the novel's setting, central themes, and Walton's character are revealed. They describe Walton's preparations and journey to the North Pole, the dangers he faces, and his emotions as well. Through these letters, Mary Shelley portrays Walton as an ambitious yet vulnerable man.

Walton writes directly to his sister Margaret as he is away. In these letters, he discusses his passions, and his desire to explore the unknown. We see Walton as a very adventurous figure. Despite knowing the risks of his voyage, he still goes on, stating that he doesn't "dare to expect such success" throughout his journey, further showcasing his bravery and determination. Simultaneously, Walton reveals the immense loneliness he feels being away at sea, stating that he "shall certainly find no friend... among merchants and seamen". Even though he is surrounded by other people on the ship, he expresses his struggle to find someone he can truly connect with and his need for a friend who can truly empathize with and understand him. This makes Walton appear as more relatable and human to us readers as well.

Shelley uses vivid language and imagery to reflect Romantic and Enlightenment ideas, highlighting the depth of Walton. For example, Walton describes the Arctic as a "region of beauty and delight... land surpassing in wonders and in beauty every region hitherto discovered". This description creates a feeling of awe and admiration. The language used shows Walton's desire to experience nature's beauty firsthand, despite the risks that he may face. In his letters, he also describes the ice and mountains in a very dramatic way, "vast irregular plains of ice", portraying the nature around him as beautiful and also powerful. These descriptions show Romantic and Englishmen ideas of the values of emotion, experience, and discovery.

The MIT Press footnotes help deepen our understanding of Walton by giving additional historical context for Walton's influences. In particular, the notes explain that Walton was inspired by the broader idea of exploration and progress during the Enlightenment, showing where his fascination with discovery comes from. Overall, the footnotes provide us with additional information that helps in better understanding Walton.

Walton serves as a frame narrator who parallels and foreshadows Victor Frankenstein because they share many of the same qualities. They are both ambitious and seek knowledge and glory, as seen in Walton when he says "satiate my ardent curiosity with the sight of a part of the world never before visited...". In addition, they also both display feelings of loneliness as seen in Walton before. I think by putting in the letters of Walton, Shelly creates another lens to see Victor through so he can better be understood.

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Matilde Montoya
12/1/2025 08:02:21 pm

I totally agree! I think that they have this secret bromance going one which, I think is bonded by their emotions of feeling lonely and not really having someone who truly understands them, until they meet one another. They have this connection of wanting the wisdom of life to have ultimate glory, which is great to have, but I think that they are missing the point of the wisdom which is gaining the knowledge through experiences in our lives which change our intelligence to make better ones with new experiences we are going to get in the future!

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RUPA BAI FURDOONJI
12/1/2025 08:47:08 pm


I agree because Victor and Walton are so alike, and Shelley included Walton's story for some big reasons. Both characters have this big drive to do something amazing and be remembered for it; Victor wanted to be a pioneer by conquering death, making him feel superior, while Walton is on a similar path, wanting to explore and discover things no one else has, like his fascination with the compass pointing north, which shows his deep curiosity about nature's secrets. Shelley used Walton's letters at the start of the novel to introduce the main ideas of ambition and exploration, and act as a preview for Victor's journey and potential dangers. Plus, Walton's descriptions of the wild Arctic show the excitement of the Romantic era, with its love for nature and adventure.

Elisabeth Wollman
12/2/2025 03:26:16 pm

I like how you mention the idea of vulnerability and how Walton’s expression of his deepest desires and worries make him more relatable and human. He writes with a passion that is hopeful, ambitious, yet both intellectually and emotionally engaging to read, which I think not only lends itself to his (failed) poetic background, but to Shelley’s choice of imbuing the Romantic ideals you mentioned. I also think Walton’s vulnerability is very telling of the relationship he has with his sister; he doesn’t hold anything back in his letters, which I thought was interesting and something I hope to see developed. Later in your post, you mention how Walton’s story parallels Victor’s, and I am also intrigued by this and their dynamic; will Walton heed his friend’s warning, halting his quest for discovery and glory, or will he throw caution to the wind, risking the lives of him and his crew all in the name of glory? Only time will tell!

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Marie Curie
12/2/2025 01:56:29 pm

The first four letters of Mary Shelley's "Frankenstein" from Robert Walton to his sister to slowly build a picture of his personality, way before Frankenstein is introduced. Through the letters, Shelley shapes Walton as a complex, lonely and ambitious character.

In the first letter, Walton talks about his goal of achieving greatness through exploration. He was embarking on a grand voyage to "tread a land never before imprinted by the foot of man." He wants to complete something no one else has, this shows his ambition and overconfidence. He isn't just exploring, he's doing it for the feeling of power that comes with it. I the letter he talks as if success is guaranteed, and he dismisses/brushes over the risks of it, " If I succeed, many, many months, perhaps years, will pass before you and I may meet. If I fail, you will see me again soon, or never."

In the second letter, Walton admits that he is in fact deeply lonely. He wants a "true friend" who shares his passions. In the letter he states, "I have no one near me, gentle yet courageous, possessed of a cultivated as well as of a capacious mind, whose tastes are like my own, to approve or amend my plans." Despite his confidence, he admits he doesn't have any friends, highlighting emotional vulnerability. He imagines finding someone who can enter his thoughts and approve or amend his plans. He is torn between his dreams and hopes for the expedition and the heavy emotional burden of being alone. Shelley uses this tension, to make Walton empathetic while also foreshadowing his inner conflict as he goes on the expedition.

In the third letter, Shelley uses imagery and language to further shape how readers view and understand Walton. Mary Shelley describes the Arctic as a "vast, frozen wilderness", "desolate", and "sublime", even though he attempts to persuade himself of its dangers. The author uses these words to show Walton's hopefulness for greatness and also to show his bravery.

In the fourth letter, Walton describes his first encounter with Victor Frankenstein. By meeting Frankenstein, Walton sees a possible future version of himself. Destroyed by ambition. Victor's exhausted, ruined state embodies the destructive consequences of the goal Walton has for this voyage. In Victor, Walton sees his own future reflected back at him which is a future in which the relentless pursuit leads to isolation and suffering.

Although the fourth letter might seem like an "inefficient storytelling", it is in fact the opposite. We find out through the MIT footnote by Joey Eschrich that "the letters are tangible artifacts that make emotional labor- the investment of time, wit, and emotional energy that make human relationship functional and rewarding." Though this is the life of Walton, it is the exact opposite for Victor because that explanation reveals exactly what the creature is missing. He has no one to share his experiences with so his life becomes vulnerable and he reacts violently to it.

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Agnes Pockels link
12/4/2025 10:14:04 pm

I completely agree with what you said about the “bromance” being made between Victor and Walton. They seem to have such a strong connection because they both share the same emotional wounds with feeling lonely and feeling as if nobody understands them. when they meet. It’s like they finally find their other half who mirrors themselves. They both chase knowledge and glory, with the mindset that achieving something big will get them their life meaning. Though, they do fail to realize that real knowledge comes from the experience and relationships that help shape us, not just the achievements that we make. Shelley uses their bun to show how easily ambition can blind someone to the importance of human connection.

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Yoshioka Yayoi
12/2/2025 10:22:48 pm

In Mary Shelley's novel, 'Frankenstein," the portrayal of Robert Walton through the first four letters is crafted to reveal his multifaceted character. By examining Walton's voice, tone, and narrative perspective, one can discern his yearning for exploration and knowledge, tinged with a sense of isolation and vulnerability. Shelley uses language, imagery, and romantic concepts to evoke an empathetic response towards Walton, showing parallels to Victor Frankenstein's own ambitions.

Through the MIT Press footnotes, readers gain a deeper insight into Walton's motivations and influences, enriching their understanding of his character. Walton not only mirrors Victor's trajectory but also foreshadows the dangers of unbridled ambition. Shelley weaves these elements together to create a complex character in Robert Walton.

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Frances Montresor Buchanan Allen Penniman
12/3/2025 11:49:18 am

Mary Shelley uses the first four letters to show us who Robert Walton is. We see his voice, tone, and perspective through his writing. Walton is ambitious and wants to explore new places. He writes about his desire to see "a part of the world never before visited" (Letter 1). He is also emotional and shares his fears, like being "forever disappointed" (Letter 2). Shelley uses beautiful language and ideas from her time to help us understand Walton. The footnotes from MIT Press give us more information about what influences Walton and how he thinks. Walton's story is like a frame around Victor Frankenstein's story. They share similar goals and flaws. Through Walton, Shelley introduces themes that will be important in the rest of the book, like being careful what you wish for and not trying to be too powerful. Overall, Walton's letters give us a good idea of who he is and help us understand the rest of the story.

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Agnes Pockels link
12/4/2025 06:59:58 am

In letters I-IV of Frankenstein, Mary Shelly portrays Robert Walton as an emotionally fragile but driven explorer. His letters show the narrator who explains his discovery in excitement, using romanticism to describe the arctic as a place filled with potential and beauty. Walton would love to achieve something monumental, but he doesn’t have confidence. Walton expresses his loneliness and his wish for a friend who he could have this journey with. The MIT Press footnotes show this by connecting Walton to the real Enlightenment explorers whose writing inspired him, which helped readers to see how he shows ambition to people who have valued information and glory over safety.
Walton mirrors Victor Frankenstein in notable ways. Both of these characters think they’re on the verge of achievements, they’re both shaped by idealistic ideas, and they both don’t have supportive relationships. By opening with Walton, Shelly uses this to prepare the reader to see how dangerous ambition can be when it isn’t controlled. Walton doesn’t just introduce the story, but he also hints at tragic patterns that may be present later in the story.

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Frances Montresor Buchanan Allen Penniman
12/4/2025 08:44:49 pm

What stood out to me most in your response is how you described Walton’s personality coming through in his letters. I think you are right that we learn a lot about him just from the way he writes. The quotes you picked show how he is both excited about discovering new places and worried that he might never reach the goals he sets for himself. I also liked the way you mentioned the MIT Press footnotes, because they really do help explain where Walton gets his ideas and why he thinks the way he does. Your point about Walton setting up the rest of the novel was very strong. His ambition and lack of support make him feel similar to Victor, and that connection prepares the reader for what is coming. Your explanation helped me see why Shelley begins the story with Walton at all.

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Emily Warren Roebling
12/5/2025 08:52:40 am

Good afternoon fellow peers, after some reading this is what I have come up with and have thought about this silly prompt of yours. Robert Walton starts as a deeply melancholy character. He is very monotone and doesn't seem like he shows it to anyone. He secludes himself and while he gets along with others it seems more like a facade than an actual friend. He seems lonely and traveling up north to the land of eternal light is the only thing that is keeping him going saying, “...I feel a cold northern breeze play upon my cheeks, which braces my nerves, and fills me with delight,” (Shelly 2). This is really the only thing that has brought out some emotion in him. After some time of traveling he discovers a man, maybe as broken as he is and he forms a deep friendship with him. He talks to him all the time and he thinks of him as a brother. I think this foreshadows Victor's personality in the actual story. He's going to be a lonely mad one day discovering a passion of some sort that will bring him joy and excitement.

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Mélanie Hahnemann
12/7/2025 08:45:25 pm

In the opening four letters of Frankenstein, Mary Shelley creates character Robert Walton as a deeply ambitious yet very vulnerable seeker whose voice plays a big role in shaping the novel's framing. Through Walton's tone, which can be described as reflective, honest and quite powerful. Shelley shows a character driven by his ideas of discovery while equally being obsessed with the idea of romance. Walton's character wants to give immeasurable help to all people, which shows both his good intentions and his crucial wish to be held to an important status level(Letter I). However, Walton's insecurities are shown in the moments of his loneliness, especially when he tells Margaret that he has no one that can understand him.(Letter II). The imagery Shelly uses to describe the Arctic landscape can serve as a parallel that show Walton's internal state, his ambition creating shadows of isolation.


The MIT Press further illustrates Walton's scientific ambitions, reading influences e.t.c as all these have shaped his view and push to do the extreme. By creating Walton as a narrator whose desires mirror Victor's future confessions, Shelly is able to foreshadow the consequences of unguided aspiration. Leaving Walton as both a warning and reflection: a man at the tippy top of the same path Victor has already gone through.

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Emily Warren Roebling
12/15/2025 08:40:31 am

I love this point of view, I never really thought of Robert Walton as obsessed with romance but now that you mention it it totally makes sense. While Robert may seem “nonchalant” about it and just kind of depressed that he doesn't have somebody, I can totally see how he may be as obsessed with it as he is about fame and glory. I just wonder how Robert Walton's character will foreshadow Frankenstein. Will he be equally obsessed with romance; will he find someone like Robert found someone at least to talk to? Or will it be something else entirely. This has been a great conversation madam Mélanie Hahnemann.

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